Shauni your essay is very good - well done. You do well to mention how the norms of expected sexuality are reinforced and the efect the celeb look has on young girls' self esteem. You make effective links between the magazine content and the harmful effects on teenage girls. Your writing is perceptive and analytical and you have a wide use of vocab. The rest of your blog also indicates your hard work and dedicationa as all tasks are completed to a high standard - Emma
Shauni your essay is very good - well done. You do well to mention how the norms of expected sexuality are reinforced and the efect the celeb look has on young girls' self esteem. You make effective links between the magazine content and the harmful effects on teenage girls. Your writing is perceptive and analytical and you have a wide use of vocab. The rest of your blog also indicates your hard work and dedicationa as all tasks are completed to a high standard - Emma
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